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September 17, 2010 / Gio

Autumn Rondeau


days of falling leaves
turns happiness bitter
the heart begins to wither
days of falling leaves
arrive as summer leaves
taking the ocean with her
days of falling leaves
turns happiness bitter

For Magpie Tales

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  1. Kristen Haskell / Oct 12 2010 9:20 pm

    Lovely poem, the art is especially nice too!

  2. Jingle / Oct 12 2010 8:53 pm

    love the repetition of the poem,
    the fall makes it bitter, wow.
    cool line!

  3. Giovanni / Oct 12 2010 4:08 pm

    Thanks Willow!

  4. willow / Oct 12 2010 4:04 pm

    Lovely bittersweet rondeau. Wonderful rhythm.

    (LOVE poetry and pork belly!!)

  5. Rene Foran / Oct 12 2010 3:55 pm

    this was very playful for such a sad poem…
    i love the fall, though it does lead to winter
    and that gives me trouble

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