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October 15, 2010 / Gio

Word-Monkey Junkie

My Man!
Spot me a 20?
Why don’t you scoop me, we’ll whack it up!
Yeh…
My buddy works at the stadium,
two hot dogs and a shake. No doubt.
I used to flip fandango with the fellas
and fantasize about flippers.
I need to go with God. Godspeed!
Get the monkey off my back.

Inspired by
Flash Fiction 55

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  1. shewriting / Oct 18 2010 2:08 am

    tight write…its either God or the monkey it seems and you captured that perfectly in just 55 words. I had to miss the g-man’s place this past friday, but I am glad I caught your Flash fiction here…

  2. moondustwriter / Oct 15 2010 10:02 pm

    I’m glad I am ignorant of the drug culture – except to see the results in drug rehab.

    A nicely played 55
    glad you joined us!!!!

    moon smiles

  3. PattiKen / Oct 15 2010 5:03 pm

    Now that’s a 55 with a serious message.

  4. Jingle / Oct 15 2010 3:09 pm

    beautiful word flow.
    love the wisdom, humor, and message in it.
    impressive 55.

  5. gautami tripathy / Oct 15 2010 12:26 pm

    Love the f sounds!

    extraction

  6. Jannie Funster / Oct 15 2010 11:58 am

    Wow, you’re excellent with words, Gio. Flipping fandango fellas and all that — no idea what those words mean — but LOVE the sound of them. Ahhh, poetry rocks!

    Great to meet you from G-Man’s!!

    Have a great day!

  7. G-Man / Oct 15 2010 11:04 am

    Gio….
    Welcome to the Friday Funfest!
    Your 55 Rocked My Man…
    Very serious and hard hitting.
    Thanks for playing, I hope you found this to be challenging, creative, and Fun.
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End…G

  8. Claudia / Oct 15 2010 9:31 am

    also enjoyed the wordplays…I used to flip fandango with the fellas…nice 55!

  9. brian / Oct 15 2010 6:56 am

    very nice 55…some great word play and yeah getting that monkey off your back…thats a good thing. welcome to 55s…

  10. Hootin' Anni / Oct 15 2010 6:39 am

    Very haunting words!!

    My 55 is a double whammy this week, two for the price of one. Of course, as always, you need to scroll down below my Friday’s Show n Tell.

    The link is HERE I’d love to have you stop by for a visit.

  11. buttercup600 / Oct 15 2010 2:44 am

    Wonderful 55 my friend, thought provoking 🙂 🙂 xx

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